HELLO AND WELCOME TO THE VERY FIRST EPISODE OF ABDITUS ORBIS YES I AM SCREAMING MY BUTT OFF AND NO I DO NOT NEED MENTAL HELP.
*cough*
Anyways.
If you haven't noticed over the past week or so, I added a music bar to the top.
Idk, I just thought it'd be fun to have music playing while you read.
Just thought I'd let y'all know, for those of you who were wondering why the heck that was up there. xD
Now...
Y'ALL READY FOR AO?!
YES?
GOOD.
HERE WE GO.
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Episode 1
Rosanna was enveloped in warm arms,
as a strong smell of lilies filled her nose. She stood stiffly in her Aunt’s
grasp, the hug unable to be returned.
Aunt Shelly pulled away, a large grin on her face. Her fiery
red hair, opposite of her quiet tendencies, was pulled back in a high bun. She
wore pink from nearly head to toe, and Rosanna couldn’t help but cringe. She
hated pink.
“Look
at how you’ve grown, Rosanna! Oh, you look just like your mother!”
Two
seconds into meeting her Aunt, and already Shelly had hit a sore spot.
Rosanna
closed her eyes and took deep breaths, trying to calm herself.
Her
mother was currently at the home for the mental; those who had been walking
straight along a path and then veered off, straight into the ditch at the side.
Rosanna’s mother had been a strong character the past 15 years she’d raised her
daughter. Instead of stumbling into the ditch on the side, her husband’s death
had pushed her there.
Rosanna
managed a smile, back at her aunt.
“Thank
you for taking me in.” She murmured, wishing she could pull her beanie down and
hide in its shadow.
Her
aunt made to answer, but her words fell short as a young teen came into the
hall. She stopped short upon the sight of Rosanna, looking confused, until
recognition dawned on her.
Aunt
Shelly turned to the younger girl.
“Rosanna,
this is Vega. I adopted her a few months ago. You’ll be sleeping in her room
while you stay here.”
Rosanna
couldn’t help but find it funny the way her aunt implied the last sentence; as
if her mother would go back to normal, and she could go back home in a week.
Rosanna set her bag down and settled
on the edge of the bed, as Aunt Shelly hovered near her.
“I
don’t have many rules here.” She said quietly, “I usually let Vega do what she
wishes…”
Rosanna
nodded, running her hand absentmindedly along the bed sheet.
“There
is one thing though.” Aunt Shelly cleared her throat.
“As you
no doubt saw, our house, it lies on the edge of this town. The white fence
around -“ Rosanna remembered that. A large, likely 20 foot tall fence
surrounded the town. She had wondered
about it on the drive up.
“-You’re
not allowed to go past it.”
Instantly
Rosanna felt indignation bubble up in her.
“Why?
What’s beyond it?” She asked, and Aunt Shelly shook her head.
“Nothing.
Which is why you shouldn’t go beyond it. Its desert, or something other. Nobody
ventures there because there’s nothing there.”
Rosanna
didn’t say anything, thoughts churning. If there really was just desert beyond,
why did the town need such a big encasing wall of white? Who would try that
hard to block out the view of desert?
“-Come
let me know when you’re unpacked. We’ll go out and get something for dinner.”
Rosanna blinked twice, having only heard the last of her Aunt’s words. Shelly
quickly left upon seeing Rosanna’s blank face.
Rosanna
sighed after a minute, and stood, taking the time to unpack her things and put
them away. She hadn’t brought much; only the things that held little memory of
her parents.
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Rosanna
sidled up beside Vega, who was sitting on her bedroom floor, typing away at her
laptop.
“Hey.”
She said quietly, and Vega frowned, fingers typing faster as the younger girl
ignored her.
“Vega,
can I ask you something?” Rosanna shuffled her feet uneasily. The family trio had
already gone out to dinner, at a small Italian restaurant. The meal had been a
quiet one, nobody willing to start up an awkward; and likely emotional,
conversation.
Vega
groaned and shut her laptop.
“What
is it?” She murmured, in her delicate voice, as she stood.
Vega
settled herself on her bed, her eyes searching Rosanna’s curiously as she
waited for her to speak.
Rosanna
took a deep breath. “Your mom-“
“She’s
not my mother.” Vega snapped, and then sucked in her breath. “I’m sorry. I didn’t
mean that. Continue, please.” Rosanna frowned, but moved past Vega’s troubling
moment.
She
perched herself on Vega’s bed, staring at the floor.
“Aunt
Shelly mentioned the fence around the town… what do you know about it?” Rosanna
didn’t know why she was asking, but curiosity had gotten the best of her. She
couldn’t fathom why the tall border was there.
“I know
as much as you do. The townsfolk can’t go beyond it-“
“Can’t
go beyond it? Or won’t?” Rosanna asked, interrupting Vega. Aunt Shelly had said nobody chose to go there…
Vega
frowned. “No, they can’t. It’s some
city rule or whatever. People stick to the main roads and highways when
traveling.”
“So the
roads cut through the fence?”
Vega
shook her head. “No. The fence trails alongside the main roads for a while, and
then away, sectioning off the city and a few miles beyond it. Why are you
asking me this?”
Rosanna
grew quiet, thinking.
“Just
curious.” She finally mumbled.
Rosanna
moved slowly out of Vega’s room, too lost in her thoughts to hear her adopted
cousin murmur a quiet, “Goodnight to you
too,” sarcastically.
Rosanna
stumbled back to her room, lost in thought. She quickly got ready for bed, slipping
underneath the covers of the four-poster bed.
Rosanna
stared up at the checkered material draped over the top frame of the bed,
waiting for sleep to come. She kept thinking about that fence, and Vega’s
words.
Why
would nobody be allowed beyond it?
The way
Vega had explained; the fence cordoned off a whole area beyond the town for a
few miles.
But
why?
Rosanna
rolled over on her side, sighing as she pushed the thoughts out of her mind.
It’s just a stupid town border. It doesn’t
concern me. I’ve got bigger things to worry about, she thought to herself
as she began to drift off to sleep.
If only
Rosanna knew how much the town border concerned her.
Oooooh this was very good!!!!! Well done Adi!!!! :D
ReplyDelete~Evie
Thank you Evie! ^-^
Delete~Adi
I LOVE THIS!!!!
ReplyDelete~Maddie
Yay, thanks Maddie!!!
Delete~Adi
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH ADI ITS JUST SO AWESOME AND AMAZING AND SO SUSPENSEFUL AND WELL WRITTEN ITS JUST TOO PERFECT ADI. AND THE MUSIC WAS SO NEAT TO HAVE TOO AND THE TIMING OF WHEN I READ THIE WORDS WAS LIKE THE SONG WAS MADE FOR A.O. EVEN WITH THE WAY THE TIMING WAS IF THAT MAKES SENSE. ACTUALLY PROBABLY NONE OF THIS COMMENT MADE SENSE BECAUSE I TYPED IT IN ALL CAPS BECAUSE I AM SO INCREDIBLY EXCITED ABOUT THIS SERIES. *Makes attempt to calm herself down* *breathes deeply and counts to 10* OK, I think I am slightly more sane now. ;) Anyways, this series is incredible! I absolutely love it, Adi! Your an INCREDIBLE author, you should be a published author with a #1 bestselling book!
ReplyDelete★ Shelby-Grace ★
I'M SO GLAD YOU LOVE IT SHELBY EEEEEEEE. REALLY I THOUGHT SO I HOPED THAT THE MUSIC WOULD GO WELL WITH IT. AND IT TOTALLY MADE SENSE EEE SO HAPPY YOU LOVE IT.
DeleteHehe, thanks so much! Being an author is actually what I'd love to do for my profession. =)
~Adi
Okay that was awesome! I can't wait to read more!
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Thanks Emily!! ^-^
Delete~Adi
Oh, and I love the CDs/DVDs that you put in Roseanna's bag! They're so cute! Did you make them?
ReplyDelete★ Shelby-Grace ★
Hehe, thanks! Yup, I made them myself. The CD case actually is slitted at the top and has a paper CD inside. =) And the dvd is just the cover printed and fitted around two pieces of foam glued together.
Delete~Adi
OHMYSONICSCREWDRIVERS THIS. IS. EPIIIIC!!!! XD
ReplyDeleteEEE SO GLAD YOU LIKE IT.
Delete~Adi
Oh. My.Goodness.Gracious.This.Is.Amazing.Ahhhhh.
ReplyDeleteThe content and photos are top-notch I hope I can have a photo story as good as yours someday!
~Kathryn~
I just nominated you for an award
Deletehttp://bestloveddolls.blogspot.com/2014/11/an-award.html
~Kathryn~
Thank you Kathryn; that means a ton to me. ^-^
DeleteAnd thanks so much for the award; I'll have a big award post up tomorrow. =)
~Adi
ADALINE, you are an amazing writer!! I really mean it, you're very good at descriptive writing!! I didn't really feel like it was a slow beginning, but then again, I am super excited so I don't think that I would have noticed if it was boring. Ooh, I can already tell that these two girls are up to no good ;) By the way, Cecile's (Vega's) skirt is really cute. Where did you get it? I literally can't wait for more Adaline!!
ReplyDelete~<3Ginny~
Aww thank you Ginny! I'm glad you didn't think it was slow; I was going to try and edit it but I needed a lot of the parts in the story for reference later. =)
DeleteAnd haha, yes, Vega and Rosanna are up to trouble. xD
Thanks! I got it off of VintageChicDollies on Etsy.
~Adi
That makes sense. All of my stories start really slow too :) xD Ooh, cool! I'll have to look it up :)
Delete~<3Ginny~
Glad it makes sense. =)
DeleteAnd you will; they've got cute stuff. ^-^
~Adi
Adi, you are such a talented writer! Seriously! I love your stories! This part wasn't slow at all! After all, it got my mind off Star Wars XD
ReplyDelete~Carli
Aww thank you Carli! That means so much to me. ^-^
Delete~Adi
Oh, if only GIFs were able to be inserted into blog comments. XD
ReplyDeleteThis was the first thing I checked this morning when I got online and my thought process was something along the lines of, "ASDFGJKLADFSADG" as I started reading. XD One word: AWESOME. You are an incredible writer, an amazing photographer and just epic in general. I am SO intrigued by the storyline and I doN'T KNOW HOW I'M GOING TO BE ABLE TO WAIT UNTIL NEXT TUESDAYYYY. :'D
I can't tell you how many times I have wished for that Olivia. xD
DeleteEee, I'm so happy you like it! That means so much to me, AND SORRY FOR THE WEEK WAIT. xD
~Adi
Hi Adi! I just wanted to let you know that I nominated you for my new tag, the Winter Wonders Tag! :D Here is the original post: http://aggeeks.blogspot.com/2014/11/winter-wonders-tag.html
DeleteThank you so much Olivia! I got it up already; means a ton that you nominated me! ^____^
Delete~Adi
Ooooooooooooooo! How exciting! XD
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for the next one!
Hehe, thanks Jess! ^-^
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Ok Adi,how are you so good at writing??? That was really good! I love how you write!! YOUR AMAZING!!xD <3
ReplyDelete~Rylee<3
Aww that means a lot Rylee!!! Thanks so much for the compliment! ^_^
Delete~Adi
Loving it! I can't wait to see more!!! :D It sounds really epic.
ReplyDeleteLeah <3
Thanks Leah! ^-^
Delete~Adi
Wow this is awesome!
ReplyDelete-Cat >^..^<
Aww thanks Cat! =)
Delete~Adi
SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO .....
ReplyDeleteAMAZING!!!!! I'm already in love with this.
Ugg, why do I have to wait till next Tuesday!?! :0)
- Zoë
P.s. Sorry I haven't commented lately. Whenever I try to look at your posts on my IPad it doesn't load or it crashes.
Eee I'm so glad you are!!!
DeleteAww... really sorry it's crashing... maybe it's the music bar? Sorry for that. :(
~Adi
I loved it! I can't wait for the next episode!!
ReplyDeleteHehe, thanks Hayley! ^_^
Delete~Adi
I love it so much! Any tips on curling cecile's hair? Thanks!
ReplyDeleteThanks! =)
DeleteI tend to just kind of "brush it out" with my fingers and then just twist it around my finger and slide it off... hope that made sense. xD
~Adi
GOODNESS ADI THIS IS SO SO AMAZING. IM SO IN LOVE WITH IT. WHAT ARE THE FANS OF ABDITUS ORBIS GOING TO BE CALLED? WHATEVER THEY'RE CALLED, IM ONE OF THEM. YOU REALLY MAKE ME WANT #38. WHAT DO YOU THINK OF THE NAME GEORGIA OR INDIGO OR CLOVER FOR HER IF I GET HER?! OK IM REALLY RANDOM AND IDK WHY IM STILL IN CAPS IM JUST WEIRD.
ReplyDeleteABIGAIL
(YES IM STILL IN CAPS)
EEE GLAD YOU'RE SO EXCITED. OLIVIA SUGGESTED THAT THE FANS ARE CALLED ORBS SO I THINK ORBS IT IS. AND YOU SHOULD SO GET HER. OH MY GOSH I LOVE THE NAME INDIGO YES YOU SHOULD GET HER DO IT DO IT DO IT. XD
Delete~ADI WHO WROTE IN ALL CAPS TOO XD
OOH I REALLY REALLY WANT TO GET MAG #38 SOMEDAY TOO I HOPE YOU WILL BE ABLE TO GET HER ABIGAIL! I ALSO AM TYPING IN CAPS AND I DO NOT KNOW WHY. I ALSO REALLY LIKE THE NAME INDIGO FOR HER! IF I GET HER I WOULD REALLY LIKE TO NAME HER ALICE FOR SOME REASON! ;)
Delete★ Shelby-Grace ★
ALICE IS A GORGEOUS NAME SHELBY-GRACE YOU SHOULD BOTH GET #38 CAUSE SHE'S SO FUN AND PRETTY AND IDK I'M BIASED CAUSE I LIKE RED HAIR. XD
Delete~Adi
OKAY ORBS IS A GREAT NAME IM ONE OF THEM. YAS ALICE IS A PRETTY NAME. IF I AND SHELBY GET 38, WILLOW, ALICE, AND INDIGO (OR GEORGIA) CAN BE TRIPLETS. HOW DOES THAT SOUND.
DeleteOOH THAT WOULD BE SO COOL TO HAVE TRIPLET 38 DOLLS!!! :D THAT WOULD BE SO FUN! OH AND ADI I FORGOT TO MENTION THIS IN MY FIRST COMMENT BUT I AM AN ORB TOO.
Delete★ Shelby-Grace ★
YES. THAT'D BE SO GREAT WE MUST MAKE THIS HAPPEN. XD
DeleteAND OOH GOODIE. XD
~Adi
Ok, so that was 110% worth the wait. I'm an Orb.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you like it! ^_^
Delete~Adi
This is so adorable!! Is that a mini Owl City album? lol. Adaline, you're so talented at this!
ReplyDeleteP.S. Nominated you for the Stahp Ur Too Sweet For Ur Own Good Award XD I've noticed you've been nominated for it already though, so don't worry about a new post (unless you want to, of course!).
http://eveofnight.blogspot.com/2014/11/stahp-ur-too-sweet-for-ur-own-good-award.html
Haha, yeaaaah... I managed to shove that in there. xD And thanks. =)
DeleteAww thanks so much Eve! I just got it up in my big post; means a ton to me that you nominated me for it. =)
~Adi
Cool, great introduction!
ReplyDeleteAww thanks Polka Dot Bee!
Delete~Adi
Slow start?! Whaaaat? Dat fence be cray-cray! :p I can't wait for more!
ReplyDeleteOh my gosh, I love that. "Dat fence be cray-cray," is the greatest. I should make a decal for that and put it on a shirt. xD
Delete~Adi
Also make a shirt that says: Girl, Ain't nobody got time fo dat! :)
DeleteWow! This is a really interesting photo story so far! You are a really good writer. Can't wait for the next part! :)
ReplyDeleteAww thank you! That means a lot! ^_^
Delete~Adi
You're a really good writer! This story should be good! Can't wait to see how it plays out.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ginger Spice! =)
Delete~Adi
AHHHHHH! It's soooo good, Adi! I absolutely love it and I can't wait to find out what happens!!!! I love the storyline sooo much! I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!! ;P
ReplyDelete~Kaitlyn
I'm sorry for such the long wait; it'll be worth it I assure you! =D
Delete~Adi
EEEHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteYOU'RE AN AWESOME WRITER!
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT EPISODE!
*He he* Great Job!
Thanks Ella, dear! ^-^
Delete~Adi
You probably won't read this, but I'm kinda freaking out over here. It's sooooo good, can't wait for the next installment! :)
ReplyDeleteI read every single comment and (eventually) reply to each one. =)
DeleteThanks so much, Autumn, that means a lot! ^_^
~Adi